Five Sentence Fiction: Devotion

Photograph by Lisa Shambrook (please do not use without permission)

As the hunt over Snowdon’s craggy chaos roamed, Llewellyn pondered why his hound, Gelert, had not shown at the bugle call.

With a sigh and empty hands the hunt homeward hied, and Llewellyn stared in horror as Gelert bounded to greet him with blood dripping from his lips and fangs, and as Gelert crouched to lick his master’s feet, Llewellyn raced wildly beyond the bewildered dog to his babe’s crib found blood-stained and torn.

With fear surging he frantically sought his son, but found him not, and crazed with grief slid his vengeful sword deep into Gelert’s side.

As Gelert released a dying yelp, an infant’s cry was heard from beneath the couch; Llewellyn desperately lifted the chaise and seized his son in abounding joy… and then his blood ran cold and his heart stood still, as on the floor behind the couch he spied a tremendous wolf, bloodied in death.

Llewellyn fell to his knees in anguish as he discerned his faithful hound’s actions in saving his heir, and sorrow overcame the man who would be forever haunted by Gelert’s dying yell.

Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction: Devotion

I cheated a bit with this one…I was stumped and couldn’t decide what to write then I came across a photograph of Gelert’s grave from our visit a few years ago to Beddgelert, North Wales. Gelert was the epitome of devotion and I decided to rewrite William Robert Spencer’s famous poem ‘Beth Gelert’ as five sentence prose…

I truly hope I’ve done it justice as it’s by a long, long way my most favourite poem.

Just in case you haven’t read it or come across it before…please, please, take a minute or two to read it through…(I wanted to post a link to the poem, but thought I’d post it myself as I love it so much! Note: I always cry when I read it…)

BETH GELERT

The spearman heard the bugle sound,

And cheerily smiled the morn;

And many a brach, and many a hound,

Attend Llewellyn’s horn:

And still he blew a louder blast,

And gave a louder cheer:

“Come, Gelert! Why art thou the last

Llewellyn’s horn to hear?

“Oh, where does faithful Gelert roam?

The flower of all his race!

So true, so brave, a lamb at home,

A lion in the chase!”

In sooth, he was a peerless hound,

The gift of royal John,

But now no Gelert could be found,

And all the chase rode on.

And now, as over rocks and dells,

The gallant chidings rise,

All Snowdon’s craggy chaos yells

With many mingled cries.

That day Llewellyn little loved

The chase of hart or hare,

And small and scant the booty proved,

For Gelert was not there.

Unpleased, Llewellyn homeward hied,

When near the portal-seat,

His truant Gelert he espied,

Bounding his lord to meet.

But when he gained the castle door,

Aghast the chieftain stood;

The hound was smeared with gouts of gore,

His lips and fangs ran blood.

Llewellyn gazed with wild surprise,

Unused such looks to meet;

His favorite checked his joyful guise,

And crouched and licked his feet.

Onward in haste Llewellyn passed,

And on went Gelert, too,

And still, where’er his eyes were cast,

Fresh blood-gouts shocked his view.

O’erturned his infant’s bed he found,

The blood-stained covert rent;

And all around, the walls and ground,

With recent blood besprent.

He called the child–no voice replied;

He searched, with terror wild;

Blood! Blood! He found on every side,

But nowhere found the child!

“Hell-hound! By thee my child’s devoured!”

The frantic father cried;

And to the hilt his vengeful sword

He plunged in Gelert’s side.

His suppliant, as to earth he fell,

No pity could impart,

But still his Gelert’s dying yell

Passed heavy o’er his heart.

Aroused by Gelert’s dying yell,

Some slumberer wakened nigh;

What words the parent’s joy can tell

To hear his infant cry!

Concealed beneath a mangled heap

His hurried search had missed,

All glowing from his rosy sleep,

His cherub-boy he kissed.

Nor scratch had he, nor harm, nor dread,

But, the same couch beneath,

Lay a great wolf, all torn and dead–

Tremendous still in death.

Ah! What was then Llewellyn’s pain!

For now the truth was clear:

The gallant hound the wolf had slain

To save Llewellyn’s heir.

Vain, vain was all Llewellyn’s woe;

“Best of thy kind, adieu!

The frantic deed which laid thee low

This heart shall ever rue!”

And now a gallant tomb they raise,

With costly sculpture decked,

And marbles, storied with his praise,

Poor Gelert’s bones protect.

Here never could the spearman pass,

Or forester, unmoved!

Here oft the tear-besprinkled grass

Llewellyn’s sorrow proved.

And here he hung his horn and spear,

And oft, as evening fell,

In fancy’s piercing sounds would hear

Poor Gelert’s dying yell.

And, till great Snowdon’s rocks grow old,

And cease the storm to brave,

The consecrated spot shall hold,

The name of ‘Gelert’s’ grave.

WILLIAM ROBERT SPENCER

1769-1834

Photograph of Gelert’s Grave in Beddgelert by Lisa Shambrook (please do not use without permission)