Flash! Friday: Balance


Shiva – Raphael Goetter (CC Flickr)

Life had always been off balance for Andie.

Sara had flown through everything, childhood, school, cheerleading – everything. Andie had not. Sara had flown at her first chance, now married to a city banker who took care of her every princess whim. Dad was proud of Sara, his beloved daughter.

Andie, should have been a boy, but wasn’t. When she’d climbed the old oak and hung upside-down from monkey bars without the grace of her sister, she thought she’d won her father, but she hadn’t. A clumsy girl, who failed at gym and excelled at soccer, still wasn’t a son.

Now, she perched on the bridge’s hollow railing, and an empty can rattled across the lonely road, propelled by the same gust of wind that blew her hair into her face and her tears into the river below. The shadows lengthened as the sun dropped beyond the canyon and her hips wavered.

Life had always been off balance for Andie.

(159 Words)

0. Flash! Friday

A short tale written for Rebekah Postupak’s Flash! Friday…go take a look at the other amazing stories!


4 thoughts on “Flash! Friday: Balance

  1. Peter Nena

    Off balance? But perhaps she is balancing the opposite end of the seesaw for her sister? The father wants them to be alike and I wonder at him. Good writing, Lisa. Appreciated.


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