Sabrina clasped Adam’s hand as they dashed into the split of rock at the foot of the towering cliff, and they tumbled to the floor in a giggling tangle of limbs and sodden clothes. Their hearts pounded and adrenalin surged, and the thin cotton t-shirts plastered to their skin held no further secrets.
Sabrina stared up into Adam’s dark eyes and let her fingers drag across his thigh, across his drenched jeans, her breath rasping with both exhaustion and desire. She forgot their picnic down in the meadow, now drowned beneath heaven’s cascade, and decided not to forsake her hunger…
The storm growled through the cave, like a rumbling belly, and behind the amorous couple a silent tail whipped patiently back and forth as the amused dragon’s main course and dessert quickly removed their packaging…
This prompt spoke to me in many ways…abandon…and this story idea made me smile, so I hope it tickled you too!
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A.w.e.s.o.m.e. Where is there a LOVE button when you need one?
Lol, thank you! It made me giggle when I thought of it!
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Fantastic story! I love it. May I print it out to share with my writers’ group?
Yes, Theresa, feel free to do that, I hope they enjoy it too!
So visual. A sensory feast leading us to a killer (you’ll pardon the expression) ending. Great job, Lisa!
Thanks, Joseph, 😀
That’s heart pounding and sensual thriller of adventure:)
Thank you, that’s just what I wanted 🙂
Wonderful! I’ll bet it couldn’t believe its luck!
I can picture him licking his lips too, Aileen!
I adore your writing!!! I was smiling in the beginning because it’s such a lovely image of love, and then I was excited to read more after the last sentence. You always set a perfect scene for adventure 🙂
You deserve great thanks, because your introduction to flash fiction with FSF, a few years ago now, has spawned many, many adventures…and more to come! Woo hoo Lillie xxx
I can picture them running a full speed out of the cave with dragon’s breath hot on their tails (literally)! Very good!
Let’s hope they escape… Otherwise it’s going to get gruesome! Lol
Quite a turn that story took! Fabulous Lisa! 🙂
Thanks, Aditi 🙂
I love your writing.
Great ending… quite unexpected and delightful too! 🙂
Thanks, Michelle, that means a lot to me 🙂
Whoa! That was an unexpected turn to the story. 🙂
Lol, I like to surprise! Thanks, Shail.
What a wicked yet sensual tale. Really loved this one Lisa. xx